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rip her eyelashes out

taking taking taking
hear her scream and shout

ripping ripping ripping
her hearts bleeds like a lake

taping taping taping
try to bandage this mistake

loving loving loving
til there is no more

hating hating hating
oh, please show me the door

laughing laughing laughing
to cover up the pain

crying crying crying
oops, you've found me out again

living living living
with this grief inside

dying dying dying
it's easier to do than hide

march 2003 [comments] => 10 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 36 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

dying dying dying

Contributed by LadyDama on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

giving giving giving
rip her eyelashes out

taking taking taking
hear her scream and shout

ripping ripping ripping
her hearts bleeds like a lake

taping taping taping
try to bandage this mistake

loving loving loving
til there is no more

hating hating hating
oh, please show me the door

laughing laughing laughing
to cover up the pain

crying crying crying
oops, you've found me out again

living living living
with this grief inside

dying dying dying
it's easier to do than hide

march 2003

Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-04-14 19:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by olasunkanmi on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:16:28 PM AEST
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Is really sad that we cant just stay alive forever,but with christ surely yes. I LOVE YOUR WORK.

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 07:32:01 PM AEST
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Good poem...I know what its like to hide your feelings...I am hear if you want to talk..:) ~Day~

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 01:43:15 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem.
Michelle

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 01:50:27 AM AEST
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Ooops, your poem is sad and beautiful. .. venkat

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 05:29:08 AM AEST
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sad but well written,,and we can live forever through jesus christ,,our lord,, a friend in words,,spooky

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:19:34 AM AEST
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Again we seem to paralell in our lives.. I have felt that way many times...but it is my faith that keeps me going..reach inside to the creator that you believe in..hang on to that strength and love, it will sustain you
Shari

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:36:34 AM AEST
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a wonderful write.. much more interesting and to the point than most of this nature... much happiness and beauty to you,
hugs n' love too, nessa

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 01:47:10 PM AEST
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the repetative structure of this poem is great. You lull us into a cadence with the natural rhythm, and then attack with violent interleaving. Ingeneous, beautiful, but deliciously dark.

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:24:04 AM AEST
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this is mad good!! a great write

Re: dying dying dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:17:32 PM AEST
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What a great poem! The first line hooked me in and then the second line hit me with such powerful imagery that i had to read on. Very clever. Very potent. Keep it up! Butterat Zool.

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