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I'm acknowledgably mutilated in your darkest times
Although you're quite oblivious, at least not completely careless
I'm admonished of my doings, but I see no wrong
Or am I such an instigator; A gall?
Forgive my undiscovered bitterness of which you dwell upon
Regardless of your ill mentality, I remain present to sooth your suffering

At your greatest you are my band aid, my recovery
Your smile pulls me out of your punishing abyss
I long for this love, so kind and caring
Even though, us, it's not meant to be
Yet we still prevail? Oh how daring

We had our times of separation
But of course, it's an expectation
to strive and struggle, a better world for us
So far so good, I'd always say
But hopefully we'll see better days [comments] => 0 [counter] => 102 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Bunnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Risk-free Lovers

Contributed by Bunnie on Tuesday, 18th May 2010 @ 08:45:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

This sorrow and agony, lengthy rather terse
I'm acknowledgably mutilated in your darkest times
Although you're quite oblivious, at least not completely careless
I'm admonished of my doings, but I see no wrong
Or am I such an instigator; A gall?
Forgive my undiscovered bitterness of which you dwell upon
Regardless of your ill mentality, I remain present to sooth your suffering

At your greatest you are my band aid, my recovery
Your smile pulls me out of your punishing abyss
I long for this love, so kind and caring
Even though, us, it's not meant to be
Yet we still prevail? Oh how daring

We had our times of separation
But of course, it's an expectation
to strive and struggle, a better world for us
So far so good, I'd always say
But hopefully we'll see better days

Copyright © Bunnie ... [ 2010-05-18 20:45:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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