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And our love brine
I will waddle through the bramble,
So I will be able to love and not grumble.
Let’s love my love.

I will dawdle in the brushes
And fetch you fresh red roses.
I will take wine and water
If it will make me love you better.
Let’s love my love.

Let’s love with eyes closed
And journey un-compassed
Till the road we lost,
For love will lead us back a-course.
Let’s love please love.

Day and night alike,
Together and apart alike,
In both our fault and right,
When heavy are the ocean tides
Let’s love my love.

God was, is and ever right,
He made the day you were born bright.
Let’s walk juxtaposition today,
Today a glorious day being your birthday.
My love please let’s love

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LET’S LOVE

Contributed by fish on Monday, 24th May 2010 @ 03:11:07 AM in AEST
Topic: BirthdayPoems

Let these stars shine
And our love brine
I will waddle through the bramble,
So I will be able to love and not grumble.
Let’s love my love.

I will dawdle in the brushes
And fetch you fresh red roses.
I will take wine and water
If it will make me love you better.
Let’s love my love.

Let’s love with eyes closed
And journey un-compassed
Till the road we lost,
For love will lead us back a-course.
Let’s love please love.

Day and night alike,
Together and apart alike,
In both our fault and right,
When heavy are the ocean tides
Let’s love my love.

God was, is and ever right,
He made the day you were born bright.
Let’s walk juxtaposition today,
Today a glorious day being your birthday.
My love please let’s love

Copyright Â© fish ... [ 2010-05-24 03:11:07]
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Re: LET’S LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Thursday, 3rd June 2010 @ 03:37:47 AM AEST
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Hi! This is simply beautiful in expression. Your words praise coming together, adoration & well, love. Nicely done. elle :)

Re: LET’S LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 03:52:00 PM AEST
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a interesting very wonderful poem !

Re: LET’S LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by voyage on Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 03:11:50 PM AEST
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This is great. I will send this poem to my boyfriend for his birthday tomorrow. Thank you for sharing.

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