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Still I’m waiting Suzanne
for a goodbye or hello.
I’ve got so many questions
and things I need to know.
Every girl that could be you,
I do a double take.
Or the smell of orange perfume
can make my quiet shake

Still I’m wondering Suzanne
if the city took you whole.
Or are you left in pieces,
so I scan the streets we roamed.
Once I had your number
so I call but you’re not there.
And no one can remember.
And many just don’t care.

Still I’m hoping Suzanne
that I’ll see you on the train.
Or sitting on the boardwalk,
where we sat in pouring rain.
Like the smoke that swirled around you,
you’re gone, I don’t know where.
Still I’m waiting Suzanne,
I’m always waiting here.

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Waiting for Suzanne

Contributed by debris on Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 08:14:21 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Still I’m waiting Suzanne
for a goodbye or hello.
I’ve got so many questions
and things I need to know.
Every girl that could be you,
I do a double take.
Or the smell of orange perfume
can make my quiet shake

Still I’m wondering Suzanne
if the city took you whole.
Or are you left in pieces,
so I scan the streets we roamed.
Once I had your number
so I call but you’re not there.
And no one can remember.
And many just don’t care.

Still I’m hoping Suzanne
that I’ll see you on the train.
Or sitting on the boardwalk,
where we sat in pouring rain.
Like the smoke that swirled around you,
you’re gone, I don’t know where.
Still I’m waiting Suzanne,
I’m always waiting here.

Copyright Â© debris ... [ 2010-06-01 08:14:21]
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Re: Waiting for Suzanne (User Rating: 1 )
by ExoM on Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 10:16:37 PM AEST
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For a moment this reminded me of that movies Dear John. But anyways, I loved your poems. It's really adorable and sweet. Almost a tad bit sad, but its really nice. I enjoyed it very much :) I love the last two lines especially! Way to end it with a bang! Thats what really did it for me. Way to go :)

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