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Array ( [sid] => 160299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => material mist [time] => 2010-06-01 11:07:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i was walking by a loch one bright and early morn
when i saw a mist coming with the dawn
the mist was getting closer and heading straight for me
then it got so thick i really couldnt see
suddenly i found myself in a different place
a land so bright and beautiful all covered in white lace
there were clouds of satin floating in the sky
looking wild and wonderful softly passing by
there were golden daffodils that were made of thread
standing up so proudly in there flower bed
there were two white doves sitting in a tree
weaving up some ribbon as busy as can be
this place it was so beautiful a place where i could stay
then the mist it cleared and took my dream away
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material mist

Contributed by rambo56 on Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 11:07:22 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

i was walking by a loch one bright and early morn
when i saw a mist coming with the dawn
the mist was getting closer and heading straight for me
then it got so thick i really couldnt see
suddenly i found myself in a different place
a land so bright and beautiful all covered in white lace
there were clouds of satin floating in the sky
looking wild and wonderful softly passing by
there were golden daffodils that were made of thread
standing up so proudly in there flower bed
there were two white doves sitting in a tree
weaving up some ribbon as busy as can be
this place it was so beautiful a place where i could stay
then the mist it cleared and took my dream away

Copyright © rambo56 ... [ 2010-06-01 11:07:22]
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Re: material mist (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Tuesday, 1st June 2010 @ 11:43:30 AM AEST
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I believe we've all seen this place before. It's different for everyone. But than the mist clears, and the real world intrudes. A very beautiful poem!!

Re: material mist (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 2nd June 2010 @ 03:25:08 AM AEST
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such a shame about reality! it would be great if we could just live out our dreams, and what a dream you portray. great stuff!!

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