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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Love Sucks
[time] => 2003-04-15 23:25:00
[hometext] => I guess the title it describes itself
[bodytext] => You were my earth, my wind, my fire
You were my hearts only desire.
Why can't you see
All this pain you cause to me?
I miss your kiss, I miss your touch,
I can't believe I love you this much.
I warned you before this started
Don't say I Love You....
And leave me broken hearted!
Once again I trusted you
When deep down I knew this is what you'd do.
You took my heart
And stole the key
.....Just to say you don't love me
It's nothing I did & nothing I've done
But it's your heart I have not won
So why can't I say good-bye?
Why does the thought of you still make me cry??
Take away everything, EVERYTHING you've done and said
Because right here, right now is where it all ends.
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[counter] => 253
[topic] => 22
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
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Love Sucks
Contributed by
lovesucks
on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You were my earth, my wind, my fire
You were my hearts only desire.
Why can't you see
All this pain you cause to me?
I miss your kiss, I miss your touch,
I can't believe I love you this much.
I warned you before this started
Don't say I Love You....
And leave me broken hearted!
Once again I trusted you
When deep down I knew this is what you'd do.
You took my heart
And stole the key
.....Just to say you don't love me
It's nothing I did & nothing I've done
But it's your heart I have not won
So why can't I say good-bye?
Why does the thought of you still make me cry??
Take away everything, EVERYTHING you've done and said
Because right here, right now is where it all ends.
Copyright ©
lovesucks
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2003-04-15 23:25:00]
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Re: Love Sucks
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:18:57 AM AEST
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oh heartbreaking poem. Such expession in this work. I feel your pain. Great write.
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Re: Love Sucks
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:19:11 AM AEST
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oh heartbreaking poem. Such expression in this work. I feel your pain. Great write.
Michelle |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by lovesucks on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 07:24:33 AM AEST
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Thanks so much for your input I have many more but this was the first time I actually publicated one. Thanks again....IIt's so true, it's sad!!!!!
Theresa |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by SopLea on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 02:24:04 PM AEST
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| Hi, this poem is lovely. It was heartwarming! And i totally understand what you are going through. I hope that girl/boy knows the pain he/she has caused you and feels complete misery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! also, he/she does not deserve you and you are obviously a very kind-hearted person and they are not! U nless you doe somthin wrong, in which case, its all your fault! |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by lovesucks on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 02:33:58 PM AEST
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Thank you so much for your input....I did nothing wrong by the way it was one of those times in my life where I had no choice he found someone else and then came back and I let him do the same thing to me again....First time shame on you.....Second time shame on me.. I am glad you enjoyed and really value your input. I have a million poems at home and this is the first one I have ever publicated and ironically I wrote it at work about 3 days ago all the rest are my collection....Look for more to come. Again thank you it is much appreciated.
Theresa |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by psychopunk on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:18:10 PM AEST
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| Very good job! I know that pain all too well. |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 05:48:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Theresa... This is absolutely heartbreaking..but so lovely.. Know that love and life will get better for you..
Jenni |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by lovesucks on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:53:13 PM AEST
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Thank you so much I am rather new at this and appreciate your opinions very much. Just got thru some rough times and writing helps so much so again thank you so much
:) |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by fancyface4898 on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 03:20:34 PM AEST
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| wonderful write. Very intense thank you for sharing |
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Re: Love Sucks
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:01:52 AM AEST
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| hey this is good and i like it |
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