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[sid] => 160817
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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Sand in between my Toes
[time] => 2010-06-27 21:27:04
[hometext] => Weird. I was visualizing being on a beach, having fun, and getting sand in between my toes.
[bodytext] => Discomforting fun,
enjoying the sand too much,
Souvenir toe jam
[comments] => 6
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[informant] => lesoleilnoire
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The Sand in between my Toes
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 09:27:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Discomforting fun,
enjoying the sand too much,
Souvenir toe jam
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-06-27 21:27:04]
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Re: The Sand in between my Toes
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 01:29:35 AM AEST
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| I like that, you have a great use of words, well done. |
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Re: The Sand in between my Toes
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 01:14:21 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Roses at your feet.
Haiku is not easy, but you've deserve an award for your feat!
Thanking you so much for your lovely comments on my poem.
I wish I was on the beach with sand between my toes. It was cute the way you called it "Toe Jam!"
Keep it up
Warm love,
consue |
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Re: The Sand in between my Toes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2010 @ 01:40:50 AM AEST
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You definitely know how to make people smile!!!
Tim
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Re: The Sand in between my Toes
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 05:47:36 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: The Sand in between my Toes
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:46:46 AM AEST
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| I am not sure I like toe jam, But sand between my feet sound good to me |
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Re: The Sand in between my Toes
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by 143 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 07:21:37 AM AEST
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thats to cool!
Neatly written! |
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