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champagne love
Contributed by
polojow27
on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 08:47:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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celebration,celebration
come rescue me
how many of you
have been lost
and cant see
heart hidden
in the torment
that lies written
erased smiles
off sun's face
keep the night
laughing
in our face
took my belief
stumped it
in place
seeing love
walk pass
my eyes
only to flood them
with wounded cries
praying to god
open my cork
release my nights
burp out those
beautiful days
to come
don't worry
I saved sum
so I can celebrate
this love
with someone
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Re: champagne love
(User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 10:53:16 AM AEST
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Wow....this is some pretty slick poetry. You feel like reading it in a single shot without a pause.
A very unique style of writing.Nice effort !
ps- I love the title. Very beautiful. |
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