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Array ( [sid] => 161300 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm just a couple levels under you, so you better watch out! [time] => 2010-07-21 16:54:27 [hometext] => me almost giving in to one of my stupid friends who had everything over me. [bodytext] => I'm just one more step from losing it all
just two more smiles from breaking apart
just a few more blows to break my shell
just one more tear from breaking down.

Taking a couple of breaths before I go insane
taking a few more minutes to calm myself down
just so I can get hyped again
because my thoughts are driving me crazy

Another raindrop hits my window
Another tear traces the trail of tears
already headed down my cheek
Another disappointing look coming from you.

A round of whispers travel through out my head
as the mask falls from my face
I'm choking back tears and wiping away the ones that have already fallen.
I run, while I'm running, I look back to see you..
Laughing. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 21 [informant] => tinybitinsane [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 July 21, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
I'm just a couple levels under you, so you better watch out!

Contributed by tinybitinsane on Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 04:54:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I'm just one more step from losing it all
just two more smiles from breaking apart
just a few more blows to break my shell
just one more tear from breaking down.

Taking a couple of breaths before I go insane
taking a few more minutes to calm myself down
just so I can get hyped again
because my thoughts are driving me crazy

Another raindrop hits my window
Another tear traces the trail of tears
already headed down my cheek
Another disappointing look coming from you.

A round of whispers travel through out my head
as the mask falls from my face
I'm choking back tears and wiping away the ones that have already fallen.
I run, while I'm running, I look back to see you..
Laughing.




Copyright © tinybitinsane ... [ 2010-07-21 16:54:27]
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Re: I'm just a couple levels under you, so you better watch out! (User Rating: 1 )
by kd7cnz on Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 07:57:29 AM AEST
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Wow, the pain is so clear and raw. Very well written.




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