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Array ( [sid] => 16136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Farewell [time] => 2003-04-17 04:35:00 [hometext] => Please leave comments [bodytext] => Daddy stuck around
But my mommy ran
Though my daddy was much worse
My mom was pretty bad
So I hid in the closet
Or maybe under the bed
Holding all the books I could bring
And while I cried I read.
I read about families
Who were as happy as could be
With parents who loved their kids
As much as mine hated me.
I heard my daddy screaming
You brat you should be dead!
I knew he wouldn’t kill me
Who would he have to beat up then?
So I came out of my hiding place
And stood at the top of the stairs
I stared right into his angry eyes
And got lost in what I saw there.
The next thing I knew
I was laying on the floor
The lights were all off
And he’d closed the door
I didn’t know what he’d done
Or where he was now
All I knew is this was my chance
To get out of this house
I pulled my pants up and buttoned them
I didn’t know why they were down
I opened the door a crack
And dared to peek around
I walked straight downstairs
And straight out the door
I held my head high as I walked down the street
I didn’t know what I was looking for
I wandered, eating scraps for a week
I don’t know who picked me up
Or where they found me
They told me I was a bad child
For running away from daddy
I looked into his cold eyes
And knew I couldn’t tell
So he came and picked me up
And everyone bid me farewell.
It may be the last goodbye
That I will ever tell.
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Farewell

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Daddy stuck around
But my mommy ran
Though my daddy was much worse
My mom was pretty bad
So I hid in the closet
Or maybe under the bed
Holding all the books I could bring
And while I cried I read.
I read about families
Who were as happy as could be
With parents who loved their kids
As much as mine hated me.
I heard my daddy screaming
You brat you should be dead!
I knew he wouldn’t kill me
Who would he have to beat up then?
So I came out of my hiding place
And stood at the top of the stairs
I stared right into his angry eyes
And got lost in what I saw there.
The next thing I knew
I was laying on the floor
The lights were all off
And he’d closed the door
I didn’t know what he’d done
Or where he was now
All I knew is this was my chance
To get out of this house
I pulled my pants up and buttoned them
I didn’t know why they were down
I opened the door a crack
And dared to peek around
I walked straight downstairs
And straight out the door
I held my head high as I walked down the street
I didn’t know what I was looking for
I wandered, eating scraps for a week
I don’t know who picked me up
Or where they found me
They told me I was a bad child
For running away from daddy
I looked into his cold eyes
And knew I couldn’t tell
So he came and picked me up
And everyone bid me farewell.
It may be the last goodbye
That I will ever tell.




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Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:33:45 AM AEST
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It is a heart breaking story.. venkat


Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:44:05 PM AEST
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Oh so very heartbreaking. Noone deserves this.Love and higs to you.
Your friend Michelle


Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:44:23 PM AEST
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Oh so very heartbreaking. Noone deserves this.Love and hugs to you.
Your friend Michelle


Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 11:09:12 PM AEST
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This has broken my heart.....((((hugs))))
You are very brave to share this. This will touch so many people...it sure touched my heart.
Great write,
Sharon;)


Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:06:37 PM AEST
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Awsome, I can feel my heart falling into pieces. Another great write.

The Phantom


Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 10:37:26 AM AEST
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awww big huggs, i know many will be as touched by this write as me, i think my heart skipped a beat reading this poem, so heartfelt and sad, im sorry you had this to deal with, much love to you and may your days now be filled with beauty and happiness, love n' more hugs nessa


Re: Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by Dazzle on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:14:16 PM AEST
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Awwsomee, with double "w"s and double "e"s. It's really good. You always right so good. I hope there's more to come. Endless, isn't it? I hope bright light will shine as sure I am!
Until then, this is your friend saying:
Be Happy.
~Dazzle~




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