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lost inside her dreams
she whispered to the wind
it whispered back again.

The wind sighed soft and low
through the scented pines
singing a tune of love
prettier none would find.

She whispered to the sky
it whispered back again.
It was painted azure blue
the sun it really grinned.

She whispered all her secrets
she whispered all her cares.
Nature softly listened
it all started with a whisper to the wind.

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She Whispers

Contributed by shelby on Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 07:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

She was enchanted with the day
lost inside her dreams
she whispered to the wind
it whispered back again.

The wind sighed soft and low
through the scented pines
singing a tune of love
prettier none would find.

She whispered to the sky
it whispered back again.
It was painted azure blue
the sun it really grinned.

She whispered all her secrets
she whispered all her cares.
Nature softly listened
it all started with a whisper to the wind.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2010-08-02 19:12:50]
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Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 08:03:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful. You capture the whisper of nature well in this piece. Great flow. Excellent imagery.

Heidi

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by polaris773 on Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 10:22:23 PM AEST
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its a very pretty poem

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 11:57:50 PM AEST
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Kewl, Ms. Chelle. Has such a soft gentle flowing feeling to it. You did well, my dear, you did well. Smile!

Smile!

Smile!

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 09:40:28 AM AEST
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!! Yay a ypdc oldtimer !! :D

This creates such a strong visual with minimal words, it's fantastic. I love the idea of speaking to nature and listening and hearing a response. Well done.

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by GinSoakedBoy on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:05:28 PM AEST
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Really enjoyed this. Excellent imagery and beautifully written

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 01:16:59 PM AEST
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Oh Celle, how very wonderful to have you back!
This poem is so like you dear......"whispers in your ear!"
You comments on my poems were so special, just like you!
Please stay with us now, that's the best thing for us you can do!
BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Rose at your feet. Remember who used to tell us that all the time. I missed him too!
Warm love
consue

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 04:12:48 PM AEST
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One of those poems that gives you a warm feeling inside and a smile on your face
What more could anyone ask ?

Steve

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 12:30:40 AM AEST
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I really really like this one right here;)
Daylynn

Re: She Whispers (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 09:51:12 PM AEST
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Wow, I'm way behind on my reading.
Beautiful write.
huggs, luv ya,
emy

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