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The One
Contributed by
DMills
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Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 05:21:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Although we dont see each other much
I just close my eyes and I can feel ur touch
I could taste ur lips and vision the kiss
I sit back and smile in a beautiful bliss
Cuz nothing else feels like this
And a better thought doesnt exist
And everyday that goes by I miss you more and more
Yet everyday that goes by I love you more than before
If love was a drug you'd be my addiction
You'd be my physician
Ur kiss would be the prescription that cured my condition
Ive been on an expedition looking for the perfect addition
Somebody with beauty and ambition
Im finally in the perfect position
I've found what I been missin
And thats you, so I give u recognition with these words in my composition
Heres an attempt to explain all these thoughts in my heart and brain
So thru the love and the pain, thru the sunshine and the rain
Til the blood stops flowing in my veins, my number one you will forever remain
Trust me Bby never have an ounce of doubt in you
Cuz unlike the last one Ill never run out on you
Ill always be here, even when times get rough
And I dont want this forever, cuz forever isnt long enough
He only seen the wrong in you but I only see the right in you
And I cant wait to create another life with you
So open up ur heart to me, dont be resistant
Cuz another love like this is nonexistent
I always use to proclaim that all girls were the same
And that love was just a game, then you came
Now I vision you and I in a wedding frame
And us sharing the same last name
These Feeling could never be undone
I could lose everything but as long I have The One I feel like Ive won
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Re: The One
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by The_Writing_Master on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 05:30:06 AM AEST
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| Great poem! but instead of "Ur" you should type your. |
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Re: The One
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 11:04:35 AM AEST
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My favorite part of this is:
"If love was a drug you'd be my addiction/ You'd be my physician/ Your kiss would be the prescription that cured my condition"
Its cute :D
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Re: The One
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by WordsAreMyAmmo on
Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 02:48:21 AM AEST
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| Beautiful Poem |
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Re: The One
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by Pat346 on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 09:45:46 AM AEST
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| Very cute poem! If a girl wrote this for me Id be flattered. Great write! |
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