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O Warden, why have you forgotten the innocence of youth?

A place of milk and honey, where beauty is delightful and love heals all

Caught red-handed by naivete

Narcissism rapes

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind is tortured

Of regret, mistakes, and unfulfilled longings



O Me, why have remembered a youthful angel?

Who bestowed you with a little potassium - was enough energy to get through the mire

Haunted by pleasant conversations

Everlasting vanity

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind recalls simplicity

Of the swollen lips of an affectionate Muse's kiss



O Angel of Desire, may I plead my depression before you?

Time and back again and again is calling me to live by rules and regulation

As I dance to the off-beat

Drum of love arouses

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind races

Of two bodies stepping to a passionate rhythm



O Prince, is that tainted odd beauty the one you will engage?

The pleasure of bliss's wedding shall not be wishful thinking

Virgin denied for

Savoring indulgence

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind regrets

Forsaken dreams of captivating Mt. Kuth



O Knight, will you return to someone you once loved?

The pain and sorrow, life has malevolently surrounded us with

Defeated in battles

But the war still beckons

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind cries out,

"O prince come back and rescue me with your soothing embrace."



O Rider, why have you delayed to engage in war?

I court you with the scent of pleasure that helps to pass the time

Entangled in love/hate

Enraptured heart is awakened

I am imprisoned by my warden who is me

In the deep of night, her mind is sure

Of victory and peace of mind, my love -



I give you all

If you come for me.








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The Rider vs. Me

Contributed by elisabeth on Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 04:20:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




O Warden, why have you forgotten the innocence of youth?

A place of milk and honey, where beauty is delightful and love heals all

Caught red-handed by naivete

Narcissism rapes

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind is tortured

Of regret, mistakes, and unfulfilled longings



O Me, why have remembered a youthful angel?

Who bestowed you with a little potassium - was enough energy to get through the mire

Haunted by pleasant conversations

Everlasting vanity

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind recalls simplicity

Of the swollen lips of an affectionate Muse's kiss



O Angel of Desire, may I plead my depression before you?

Time and back again and again is calling me to live by rules and regulation

As I dance to the off-beat

Drum of love arouses

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind races

Of two bodies stepping to a passionate rhythm



O Prince, is that tainted odd beauty the one you will engage?

The pleasure of bliss's wedding shall not be wishful thinking

Virgin denied for

Savoring indulgence

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind regrets

Forsaken dreams of captivating Mt. Kuth



O Knight, will you return to someone you once loved?

The pain and sorrow, life has malevolently surrounded us with

Defeated in battles

But the war still beckons

I am imprisoned by my warden, o me

In the deep of night, her mind cries out,

"O prince come back and rescue me with your soothing embrace."



O Rider, why have you delayed to engage in war?

I court you with the scent of pleasure that helps to pass the time

Entangled in love/hate

Enraptured heart is awakened

I am imprisoned by my warden who is me

In the deep of night, her mind is sure

Of victory and peace of mind, my love -



I give you all

If you come for me.












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Re: The Rider vs. Me (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 08:31:33 PM AEST
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I have to be honest Elizabeth....i don't understand most of what you write about as it is wayyyy too in-depth for me, but i do love the passion and your use of such descriptive and emotive terminology.
Prose is not my forte' .....but that being said, i liked what i read.


Re: The Rider vs. Me (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 12:18:13 PM AEST
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A powerful compelling passage
I tried to stop reading
but by the end I realized I could'nt
The depth derived is incredible
your style is unique in that there is so much going on
a masterful write

-UNORTHODOX




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