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Array ( [sid] => 162067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wait For The Future [time] => 2010-08-29 00:22:46 [hometext] => Please be honest in ur comments [bodytext] => Laying here thinking of tomorrow,
Thinking of the day that is sure to come.
The day when I'm no longer in limbo,
And stable my life will become.

This future I'm still waiting to discover,
When we can truly be happy.
Our picture perfect future exsists,
When these puzzle pieces fit perfectly.

No longer wanting to be in this state,
This state before I can start my life.
This state of constant drowning,
Just barely surviving above the strife.

I can see this vision of bliss.
Blury is the women standing beside.
Concrete is the career that I have set.
Solid is the life I will never hide.
  [comments] => 2 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 19 [informant] => Guyjular [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Wait For The Future

Contributed by Guyjular on Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 12:22:46 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Laying here thinking of tomorrow,
Thinking of the day that is sure to come.
The day when I'm no longer in limbo,
And stable my life will become.

This future I'm still waiting to discover,
When we can truly be happy.
Our picture perfect future exsists,
When these puzzle pieces fit perfectly.

No longer wanting to be in this state,
This state before I can start my life.
This state of constant drowning,
Just barely surviving above the strife.

I can see this vision of bliss.
Blury is the women standing beside.
Concrete is the career that I have set.
Solid is the life I will never hide.
 



Copyright © Guyjular ... [ 2010-08-29 00:22:46]
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Re: Wait For The Future (User Rating: 1 )
by Debris on Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 05:49:33 AM AEST
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I particularly like the last line, it resonates as internal strength. Thanks for posting.


Re: Wait For The Future (User Rating: 1 )
by brialuv on Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 11:38:20 AM AEST
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deep poem..good job i enjoyed it*




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