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[aid] => mick
[title] => Military Time
[time] => 2010-08-29 05:47:06
[hometext] => Watching her, watching me. An observation of realities.
[bodytext] => She keeps military time in a note book where she writes. Every second, Every first Neatly scrawled across a lineless page. Every coming, every going interlaced with fantasy. All the things she wanted and the things she didn’t want to be. Changing, shifting moments in her own reality. Keeping military time; documented, precisely. I keep military time. Document her every move. Delusions and confusions. Precise reports on precisely lined pages. We keep military time in parallel unison, to each action, a reaction. Our physics so precise Every moment, every minute, every second, every first. In the notebook of her life; two copies, incomplete. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 21 [informant] => debris [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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