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Array ( [sid] => 162098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beautiful Nature's Bliss [time] => 2010-08-31 08:10:18 [hometext] => When the stress and pain of life is taking you down....spend time with nature.....it will bring you around [bodytext] => Quietly I sit beneath the trees,
And let nature talk to me with it's breeze,
My heart that was lonely is now filled,
with a companion in the form of the wind.

The air is filled with humidity and mist,
The dampness feels like a gentle kiss;
raindrops fall from the towering trees;
It is a sight that can only please.

A deep breath I take and fill my being;
With the sweet smell of wet mud and grass so green;
My eyes are closed but yet I see;
Nature working in such harmony.

The raindrops falling resonate through the leaves;
Erase all the noises in my head and leave me at ease;
The sound of rain water joining the creek,
takes away every thought that made me weak.

My feet I dip in the cold running water;
Only to find my hardened heart turn softer;
O beautiful beautiful nature's bliss!
How could I have missed all this? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 27 [informant] => Avataar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Beautiful Nature's Bliss

Contributed by Avataar on Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 08:10:18 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Quietly I sit beneath the trees,
And let nature talk to me with it's breeze,
My heart that was lonely is now filled,
with a companion in the form of the wind.

The air is filled with humidity and mist,
The dampness feels like a gentle kiss;
raindrops fall from the towering trees;
It is a sight that can only please.

A deep breath I take and fill my being;
With the sweet smell of wet mud and grass so green;
My eyes are closed but yet I see;
Nature working in such harmony.

The raindrops falling resonate through the leaves;
Erase all the noises in my head and leave me at ease;
The sound of rain water joining the creek,
takes away every thought that made me weak.

My feet I dip in the cold running water;
Only to find my hardened heart turn softer;
O beautiful beautiful nature's bliss!
How could I have missed all this?

Copyright © Avataar ... [ 2010-08-31 08:10:18]
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Re: Beautiful Nature's Bliss (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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This is cool and soothing and so well constructed. Love the way it rhymes, nature makes you feel so at ease and with this piece I could feel at ease while reading. Nice one.

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