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Array ( [sid] => 162156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I can paint a picture on a blank canvas [time] => 2010-09-04 23:25:34 [hometext] => a call...stop running. lets stop chasing.. [bodytext] => Looking at you is like staring at the sea..
huge and unpredictable.
Your chaos, harmful as it can be,
yet a beauty when peaceful.

A Past you hold on to, pain you cant let go..
Untold yet shared, unsaid ..yet heard.
Touches, longing for love. and words that deny the truth
Enough to understand...

A song we might both know
unsung til we are one
yet, you choose to be alone
Even with the love bestowed

Blank canvas you may portray,
I see so much when i stare..
My words, may not be enough,
But realize i hold you dear.

I hold no key to free your soul..
But id surely try to get you there.
My way might not be like yours,
But hold me and youll know its there..
Please feel I care..


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I can paint a picture on a blank canvas

Contributed by OnceAnAngel on Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 11:25:34 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Looking at you is like staring at the sea..
huge and unpredictable.
Your chaos, harmful as it can be,
yet a beauty when peaceful.

A Past you hold on to, pain you cant let go..
Untold yet shared, unsaid ..yet heard.
Touches, longing for love. and words that deny the truth
Enough to understand...

A song we might both know
unsung til we are one
yet, you choose to be alone
Even with the love bestowed

Blank canvas you may portray,
I see so much when i stare..
My words, may not be enough,
But realize i hold you dear.

I hold no key to free your soul..
But id surely try to get you there.
My way might not be like yours,
But hold me and youll know its there..
Please feel I care..






Copyright © OnceAnAngel ... [ 2010-09-04 23:25:34]
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Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 11:05:05 AM AEST
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This poem, is beautiful. I am in love with someone and I can really really relate to this . Thank you for such a lovely poem


Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas (User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 09:01:28 PM AEST
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nice


Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 04:58:28 PM AEST
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this is really beautiful.


Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 02:48:39 PM AEST
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:)


Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 10:37:42 PM AEST
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Sweet


Re: I can paint a picture on a blank canvas (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 02:51:45 PM AEST
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Filled with mixed emotions, love, confusion, hope, sorrow, desire and commitment. mmm I think its called living...


Nice write.




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