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Alive or dead nobody knows
Somehow you need to dig inside
Throw out the dirt and dive into the light
Somehow you need to break free
See a glimpse of heaven in a sleepy pine tree
Care for others night and day
For a better world rise up and pray
Leave those petty trifles way behind
Soar above with a pure open mind
Look beyond the dull and meek
Climb a mountain just to have a peek
In all the chaos strive to be a meaning
Act and think but with a feeling
Marry the sun and kiss the moon
Embrace that sense of pending doom
Live, stay and walk away
Find yet another lonely bay
Seek a smile within and without
Make your guardian angels happy and proud
And when in doubt, when afraid to die
Lie on your back and ask Him why

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On a Poros Sky

Contributed by omarzz on Friday, 17th September 2010 @ 02:01:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

And this is how the story goes
Alive or dead nobody knows
Somehow you need to dig inside
Throw out the dirt and dive into the light
Somehow you need to break free
See a glimpse of heaven in a sleepy pine tree
Care for others night and day
For a better world rise up and pray
Leave those petty trifles way behind
Soar above with a pure open mind
Look beyond the dull and meek
Climb a mountain just to have a peek
In all the chaos strive to be a meaning
Act and think but with a feeling
Marry the sun and kiss the moon
Embrace that sense of pending doom
Live, stay and walk away
Find yet another lonely bay
Seek a smile within and without
Make your guardian angels happy and proud
And when in doubt, when afraid to die
Lie on your back and ask Him why

Copyright © omarzz ... [ 2010-09-17 02:01:08]
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Re: On a Poros Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by CarrieLindeman on Friday, 17th September 2010 @ 05:11:17 PM AEST
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That poem was really great. It got me thinking. Loved it alot!

Re: On a Poros Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 05:49:37 PM AEST
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This has elements of becoming a good poem. In two places you failed to keep the rhyming pattern "inside - light" and "without - proud".
My fave line would be "Care for others night and day - For a better world rise up and pray".
By the way....what does 'Poros' mean?

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