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Array ( [sid] => 16239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Self Demise [time] => 2003-04-19 16:35:00 [hometext] => This poem is about someone wanting to kill themselves because they lost the love of the one person they believe they are meant for. [bodytext] => The air is chilled with remembrance
Fond days left in an acid rain
Here I'm lost in a conundrum storm
imbibing tears to feed my pain

The windows broadcast only dolourousy
In varying achromatic shades
The tradgedy, and only life I know
Pleasantries can only fade

Since the day the lights went out
My feelings only macerate
I trespassed into the nirvana
Now agony is my only fate

Destiny has conveyed it's storms
Upon my sorrow hanging head
Here in this life without your love
I bid myself, I were dead [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => flirtyrockstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Self Demise

Contributed by flirtyrockstar on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The air is chilled with remembrance
Fond days left in an acid rain
Here I'm lost in a conundrum storm
imbibing tears to feed my pain

The windows broadcast only dolourousy
In varying achromatic shades
The tradgedy, and only life I know
Pleasantries can only fade

Since the day the lights went out
My feelings only macerate
I trespassed into the nirvana
Now agony is my only fate

Destiny has conveyed it's storms
Upon my sorrow hanging head
Here in this life without your love
I bid myself, I were dead

Copyright © flirtyrockstar ... [ 2003-04-19 16:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Self Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 04:49:25 PM AEST
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I love the description in this poem, and the way it flowed, it was beautiful!
Hugs, Lisa

Re: Self Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 05:37:18 PM AEST
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I liked this Liz cept I couldn't understand some of the words. it was nice to see a poem from you after so long. keep it up!

Your friend,
Joel

Re: Self Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:22:24 AM AEST
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So cold with much pain and loss, I liked the way it flowed as one and came together with a good conclusion.
A very good write, look forward to seeing more.

Re: Self Demise (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 03:05:36 PM AEST
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i loved this poem, it is so well written, your talent just shines through in it.

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