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Array ( [sid] => 162424 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lies [time] => 2010-09-23 09:09:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It seems like everyone is full of ****,
Everything spoken is a lie,
No one around can be trusted,
This never seems to defy,
I tried so hard to let you in,
But you just let me down,
I sunk to the bottom of your ocean of lies,
And now I'm about to drown,
I knew you'd never be able to save me,
You were always too selfish,
Maybe I shouldn't have believed your words,
Maybe I was just foolish,
It's hard to think of how we were,
Remembering it was all untrue,
I know now everyday was possessed by lies,
We never meant a thing to you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Bexstasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lies

Contributed by Bexstasy on Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:09:38 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

It seems like everyone is full of ****,
Everything spoken is a lie,
No one around can be trusted,
This never seems to defy,
I tried so hard to let you in,
But you just let me down,
I sunk to the bottom of your ocean of lies,
And now I'm about to drown,
I knew you'd never be able to save me,
You were always too selfish,
Maybe I shouldn't have believed your words,
Maybe I was just foolish,
It's hard to think of how we were,
Remembering it was all untrue,
I know now everyday was possessed by lies,
We never meant a thing to you.

Copyright © Bexstasy ... [ 2010-09-23 09:09:38]
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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:38:57 PM AEST
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Ouch!

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 12:29:21 PM AEST
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You're sounding SO angry again. Just calm down and take a deep breath...
Chris.

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by evah2121 on Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 10:58:51 PM AEST
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I think we have all felt this way before, so I don't blame you. This world Is full of fakes, negativity, violence, and even abusers who will find a pray to hunt them down. But we have to remember to see the beauty of life. No matter how bad life gets we have to remember why we're here. We have to have faith and confidence no matter what obstacle stands In our way. Very great way of expressing your emotions. I hope you feel better.

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by xshelbyx on Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 06:23:46 PM AEST
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so true lies are everywhere and in everything now a days its hard to no who 2 trust... been there n it sucks but great poem w. true emotion

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