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Array ( [sid] => 162443 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Will Never Forget [time] => 2010-09-24 23:12:50 [hometext] => Have you ever loved someone so much, but when they pass away you simply cannot cry? [bodytext] =>
I'm staring at your beloved grave.

Remembering what you used to say,

Remembering to stay optimistic during the day.

I still remembering staring at your beautiful eyes,

Now I'm placing white flowers where your dead body lies.

It' hard to define how I feel inside,

I am certainly not happy, but I cannot cry.

I just keep thinking how time flies by.

I still remember your lovely smile,

the things you would share when I was just a child.

It's ironic how things end up,

somehow things can be ruined or reinvented,

how things work out even If not intended.

My mom has stayed strong after your death,

but sometimes she just has to take a breath.

She still can't believe that her sister is gone,

and every time she hears your song..

she holds back the tears,

because she knows you still love her very sincere.

I'm staring at your beloved grace,

and all I can say...

Is that I know you're in a better place.
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I Will Never Forget

Contributed by evah2121 on Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 11:12:50 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I'm staring at your beloved grave.

Remembering what you used to say,

Remembering to stay optimistic during the day.

I still remembering staring at your beautiful eyes,

Now I'm placing white flowers where your dead body lies.

It' hard to define how I feel inside,

I am certainly not happy, but I cannot cry.

I just keep thinking how time flies by.

I still remember your lovely smile,

the things you would share when I was just a child.

It's ironic how things end up,

somehow things can be ruined or reinvented,

how things work out even If not intended.

My mom has stayed strong after your death,

but sometimes she just has to take a breath.

She still can't believe that her sister is gone,

and every time she hears your song..

she holds back the tears,

because she knows you still love her very sincere.

I'm staring at your beloved grace,

and all I can say...

Is that I know you're in a better place.




Copyright © evah2121 ... [ 2010-09-24 23:12:50]
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Re: I Will Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 01:47:48 AM AEST
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Brilliant!! Excellently written, the reader can feel how much you miss this person.
Take care, Chris.


Re: I Will Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 02:16:14 AM AEST
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Remembering what you used to say, the power of words esp in remembrance of someone very special written from the heart


Re: I Will Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by kmarie on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 03:43:36 AM AEST
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I love this! So beautiful and emotional as well. Very well written! Please continue writing : )


Re: I Will Never Forget (User Rating: 1 )
by xbabycyutie on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 08:05:45 AM AEST
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ur writing gave me goosebumps!!!
i loved it.




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