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Array ( [sid] => 162456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kill her slowly... [time] => 2010-09-25 15:59:53 [hometext] => It's hard seeing someone you love with someone new... [bodytext] => go ahead and laugh,
rub her beauty in my face,
grab her hand and hold her close,
let me know i have been replaced.
go ahead and tell her,
the sweet things you told me,
then unravel and reveal,
all the cruelty beneath.
go ahead and fool her,
tell her you're only shy,
hold her close then push her away,
let her feel she has been denied.
go ahead and tell her,
she's the one you need,
compliment her on her hair and smile,
then lie to her like you did me.
look her in the eye,
blush and then shyly smile,
tell your self you don't need her and move on,
fall deeper in denile.
go ahead and look at her,
with disgust written on your face,
you're not man enough to let her go,
keep her as a trophy from your game.
go ahead and find another girl,
make her think she is all you will ever need,
use her then push her aside,
kill her slowly the way you did me... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pinkunicornoctober [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Kill her slowly...

Contributed by pinkunicornoctober on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 03:59:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

go ahead and laugh,
rub her beauty in my face,
grab her hand and hold her close,
let me know i have been replaced.
go ahead and tell her,
the sweet things you told me,
then unravel and reveal,
all the cruelty beneath.
go ahead and fool her,
tell her you're only shy,
hold her close then push her away,
let her feel she has been denied.
go ahead and tell her,
she's the one you need,
compliment her on her hair and smile,
then lie to her like you did me.
look her in the eye,
blush and then shyly smile,
tell your self you don't need her and move on,
fall deeper in denile.
go ahead and look at her,
with disgust written on your face,
you're not man enough to let her go,
keep her as a trophy from your game.
go ahead and find another girl,
make her think she is all you will ever need,
use her then push her aside,
kill her slowly the way you did me...

Copyright © pinkunicornoctober ... [ 2010-09-25 15:59:53]
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Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by suzyo on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 07:27:11 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this poem...It was so heartfelt...I've been there too.

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 09:19:36 PM AEST
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I feel the emotion in this flow
well done

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by NewShakespeare on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:11:49 AM AEST
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Powerful

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:10:12 AM AEST
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very powerful use of words... i like it...

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by kleetas on Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 05:26:54 AM AEST
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unicorns have excellent perception and your stinging poem shows your firey side.kewl write!

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by samueloliverrr on Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 07:09:17 AM AEST
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i LOVE this poem, i can relate so much to this, only if it was in a guys perspective... but great job.

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by Walkingdead on Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 08:59:52 PM AEST
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Very deep. Hits so close to home.

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:26:32 AM AEST
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I feel yah. The longer the relationship the more you feel this way at the end. I can honestly say I know that my ex was head over heals for 2 years though. But i guess it wasn't meant to be.

Re: Kill her slowly... (User Rating: 1 )
by eastboyez on Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 09:14:26 PM AEST
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love it !

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