|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
What More Can I Give?
Contributed by
andii1993
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 05:37:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
I give you, the only things that I want,
That I have and need,
And still, you are saddened because you haven't enough.
I am not responsible for your own life,
Nobody else but you is, and nobody else but you ever will be,
So don't look to me to try and give me your responsibility.
My love is not a bandage to cover your wounds,
Until your cuts and rips have healed,
So you can throw away the dressing and replace it next time.
I'm not your fake plant,
Who'd die, if you forgot to pretend to water me,
I am real, probably more real than you.
You see, you're not unique or special,
You're like a billion others,
Who pretend they're unique and different, when others say the same thing.
Once your harm has been dealt to me,
Even fools can realise,
And that's what we are, fools in a poor man's world.
As the Japanese say,
Fall seven times and rise eight,
I'll always get back onto my own two feet.
Deal me your pain,
Because I catch your gaze which you aim to cause pain,
And you complain others treat you bad. Hypocrite.
So, I'll like to reliterate my third line, but in a question
With force to get it into your naive mind,
You're saddened, because you don't have enough?
Don't wear out a day before it comes,
Personally, I look at you, and I wish I had everything you do,
But I don't, and I know I have enough. Do you want some more?
andii1993, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
As of this posting and documentation, you have posted 5 poems and have only made one interactive comment.
BEFORE posting another poem, please, at the very least, bring your comment count up to 6. Thank you.
Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.
Copyright ©
andii1993
... [
2010-09-28 05:37:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: What More Can I Give?
(User Rating: 1 )
by Walkingdead on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 09:03:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| So deep. |
|
|
Re: What More Can I Give?
(User Rating: 1 )
by girlbballjunky101 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 07:30:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This looks really good...:)
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
