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[aid] => mick
[title] => Full. Yet Empty.
[time] => 2010-09-28 07:55:54
[hometext] => Just a quick one i wrote tonight..havent written poetry in a long time. Feedback appreciated
[bodytext] => I sit slumped.. atop of my ancient, cobwebbed throne, long forgotten, wrinkled and skeleton-like. Boasting a palace full of tremendous treasure, but nobody to share it with. My thoughts echo through dark, empty passages. Nobody is around to listen. Not a single footstep has been uttered in these forbidden halls, for what feels like centuries. As i create beautiful music, it reverberates naturally with no bodies to soak up the sound. Only the cold wind responds, in its own ghostly, haunting wail. It sings of deep regret and sorrow. Forever and second. Stubbornly, I wait .Unnoticed and unheard of. Not even a trickle of hope in sight, My time is frozen, trapped underground, acheing to reach the clouds. Only this silent castle knows. By David Di Paolo Copyright 29th September 2010 Able8, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Able8 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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