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Array ( [sid] => 162658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Sad Song [time] => 2010-10-06 12:08:01 [hometext] => Another one from the vault please enjoy...The Phantom [bodytext] => Sun rise, sun sets, a soul consumed with regret,
Hearts fly, and hearts break, pain is left when love vacates,
Tears fall, and tears dry, head fills with thoughts of suicide,
What to do, and where to go, all alone fills so cold,

A broken heart leads to broken dreams,emotional scars seldom seen,
Locked away, and locked up tight, try and get through a lonely night,
The heart bleeds, a lover's pled,
A moonless night, grey clouds the only thing in sight,

Misery's pill, the world stands still,
Rain drops fall from heaven's eyes, Why in the world did you say goodbye,
Questions unanswered, prayers unheard, me without you, that's absurd,
Willing to forgive, but can't forget, the hurt I feel with every breath,

It was a shot to the heart, that tore my world apart,
Protect you from harm, blow my brains out in your lap , lie here and die in your arms,
But away you went, scream to the God's if only to vent,
What did I do that was so wrong, it turned our love into one sad song?

Forever Faithful
The Phantom

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 347 [topic] => 32 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Nov 9, 2010 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

One Sad Song

Contributed by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 6th October 2010 @ 12:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Sun rise, sun sets, a soul consumed with regret,
Hearts fly, and hearts break, pain is left when love vacates,
Tears fall, and tears dry, head fills with thoughts of suicide,
What to do, and where to go, all alone fills so cold,

A broken heart leads to broken dreams,emotional scars seldom seen,
Locked away, and locked up tight, try and get through a lonely night,
The heart bleeds, a lover's pled,
A moonless night, grey clouds the only thing in sight,

Misery's pill, the world stands still,
Rain drops fall from heaven's eyes, Why in the world did you say goodbye,
Questions unanswered, prayers unheard, me without you, that's absurd,
Willing to forgive, but can't forget, the hurt I feel with every breath,

It was a shot to the heart, that tore my world apart,
Protect you from harm, blow my brains out in your lap , lie here and die in your arms,
But away you went, scream to the God's if only to vent,
What did I do that was so wrong, it turned our love into one sad song?

Forever Faithful
The Phantom

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Re: One Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 6th October 2010 @ 03:48:36 PM AEST
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Very, very, very sad but great writing.
huggs, Blessings,
emy

Re: One Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by andii1993 on Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 02:34:00 AM AEST
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I love how powerful it is :)

Re: One Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 12:19:43 PM AEST
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This is poetry! The emotion, the imagery, and flow. Good one.

Re: One Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 11:04:30 AM AEST
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This is really good and I love the flow! I can definitely relate to the feelings.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: One Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 11:09:04 AM AEST
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D'oh!. Actually meant to say can relate to the feelings of wanting to commit suicide but I could never actually complete the act .

Re: One Sad Song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:35:44 AM AEST
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I just wanted to pop in and say, hey
Mick needs to fix our private message

huggs.
emy

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