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Array ( [sid] => 162727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Words from a healing heart [time] => 2010-10-10 22:43:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I took that chance,
And we spent some time,
I knew it was wrong,
I heard the clock chime,
It brought me to reality,
How stupid I had been,
I didn't want to see you,
But you were just so keen,
The way you looked at me,
Made me feel quite sick,
I remember you breaking me down,
Like flames on a candle wick,
You tried to feed me your lies,
These lies I refused to swallow,
You thought I'd let you in,
But inside I'm pretty hollow,
I don't wish to see you again,
Or hear of your name spoken,
You can't get round me anymore,
Because my heart is no longer broken. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Bexstasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Words from a healing heart

Contributed by Bexstasy on Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 10:43:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I took that chance,
And we spent some time,
I knew it was wrong,
I heard the clock chime,
It brought me to reality,
How stupid I had been,
I didn't want to see you,
But you were just so keen,
The way you looked at me,
Made me feel quite sick,
I remember you breaking me down,
Like flames on a candle wick,
You tried to feed me your lies,
These lies I refused to swallow,
You thought I'd let you in,
But inside I'm pretty hollow,
I don't wish to see you again,
Or hear of your name spoken,
You can't get round me anymore,
Because my heart is no longer broken.

Copyright © Bexstasy ... [ 2010-10-10 22:43:04]
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Re: Words from a healing heart (User Rating: 1 )
by girlbballjunky101 on Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 07:28:15 AM AEST
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That was very interesting write. I was there once and i got pasted it. And happy to hear you did to. :)

Re: Words from a healing heart (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 11:16:47 AM AEST
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Nice rhythm on this. Good see to another submission from you. You always write well.
Take care, Chris.

Re: Words from a healing heart (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:13:49 AM AEST
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Interesting. Makes me wonder what you went through.

Re: Words from a healing heart (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 08:34:16 AM AEST
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Another out standing write just keep doing what you are doing.

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