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Array ( [sid] => 163012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The best thing that I’ve ever seen [time] => 2010-10-31 18:11:50 [hometext] => ((She broke my heart. I broke her heart. She asked me to write her a poem while she waits. I just wrote this)) [bodytext] => The best thing that I’ve ever seen
More clear than my slim plasma screen

Was not the Whistler glacier snow
That sight was really stunning though

Niagara falls, the way they flow
No that’s not it, but they were OH!!!

The first time that I saw a lake
And first time I saw a snowflake

Both times had left me speechless, yes
Other sights surpassed nonetheless

My smile when high-school days were done
Was quite the sight, but not the one
My grade of 94%
That sight just left me so content

The sight of people clap and bow
After I read my poem, wow
That was my sister’s wedding too!
Oh what a day and what a view

Those sights were great, that said and done
No, none of them are quite the one

The best sight that I’ve seen so far
Was seeing you for who you are
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 2 [informant] => po-it [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The best thing that I’ve ever seen

Contributed by po-it on Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 06:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The best thing that I’ve ever seen
More clear than my slim plasma screen

Was not the Whistler glacier snow
That sight was really stunning though

Niagara falls, the way they flow
No that’s not it, but they were OH!!!

The first time that I saw a lake
And first time I saw a snowflake

Both times had left me speechless, yes
Other sights surpassed nonetheless

My smile when high-school days were done
Was quite the sight, but not the one
My grade of 94%
That sight just left me so content

The sight of people clap and bow
After I read my poem, wow
That was my sister’s wedding too!
Oh what a day and what a view

Those sights were great, that said and done
No, none of them are quite the one

The best sight that I’ve seen so far
Was seeing you for who you are




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Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st October 2010 @ 10:05:43 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good writing.
blessings,
emy


Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 02:28:21 AM AEST
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Thank you for posting this poem - I love the line
"The best sight that I’ve seen so far
Was seeing you for who you are"

Be good if we could all have a "lightbulb" moment when we see people for who they really are instead of the masks we put up.

Bless.




Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 1st November 2010 @ 06:02:46 AM AEST
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Wow is that all I need to say about this write.
It must be amazing to realize that you can see
and love someone for whom and what they
are completely. Great write and I hope all has
worked out for the poem conveys that you
truly love what you have found in this person.
Great write and thanks for posting it hit home
for me.


Re: The best thing that I’ve ever seen (User Rating: 1 )
by thridan on Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 07:32:46 PM AEST
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humorous yet expresses what you want to say ! :)




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