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[title] => A dream
[time] => 2010-11-03 20:34:40
[hometext] => this is my first submission and i wrote it about well liking a guy :]
[bodytext] => my heart skips a beat when i see your face. my lips crave the touch of yours. my arms yearn to hold you close. my heart desires to be loved by you. my hands ache to be held in yours. the thought of being yours makes me dizzy. i can taste your sweet tongue against mine, and feel your body in our passionate embrace. my heart flutters at the thought, and i sigh. will i be yours and you mine? i start at this and wake up. a single tear falls when i realize its all a dream..
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A dream
Contributed by
ivory_wings96
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Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 08:34:40 PM in AEST
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SecretLove
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my heart skips a beat when i see your face. my lips crave the touch of yours. my arms yearn to hold you close. my heart desires to be loved by you. my hands ache to be held in yours. the thought of being yours makes me dizzy. i can taste your sweet tongue against mine, and feel your body in our passionate embrace. my heart flutters at the thought, and i sigh. will i be yours and you mine? i start at this and wake up. a single tear falls when i realize its all a dream..
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Re: A dream
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 08:50:13 PM AEST
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Great poem. I could feel the intense passion and infatuation here. I like the image of the single tear falling. Very nicely written. Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: A dream
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by brialuv on
Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 09:33:58 AM AEST
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| good use of imagery i like it...well done? |
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Re: A dream
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 03:29:07 PM AEST
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Another sweet, power full write.
I still think he should be reading your work.
Smiles,
emy |
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Re: A dream
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th November 2010 @ 04:00:41 PM AEST
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A dream can turn into reality if you want it badly enough.
I like the way you have poured out your feelings in this.
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Re: A dream
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by kadie on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 12:38:36 PM AEST
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i thought that was Amazing .
keep writing,
xoxo,
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