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Array ( [sid] => 163252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The one you never knew. [time] => 2010-11-15 04:48:43 [hometext] => I'm on my mobile again so excuse any typos please! [bodytext] => I tried to be there for you,
When I knew you needed me,
But when the tables turned,
You were nowhere to be seen,
I tried to let you know,
That all wasn't okay,
But you didn't care,
And you had nothing to say,
So I fought the pain alone,
You were never there,
I watched as it deteriorated,
The love we never shared,
I knew what you were like,
Your selfish ways, so cold,
I knew your words were lies,
About the future and growing old,
I hope you find your match,
Someone heartless like you,
I'm happy to remain,
'The one you never knew.' [comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Bexstasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

The one you never knew.

Contributed by Bexstasy on Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 04:48:43 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I tried to be there for you,
When I knew you needed me,
But when the tables turned,
You were nowhere to be seen,
I tried to let you know,
That all wasn't okay,
But you didn't care,
And you had nothing to say,
So I fought the pain alone,
You were never there,
I watched as it deteriorated,
The love we never shared,
I knew what you were like,
Your selfish ways, so cold,
I knew your words were lies,
About the future and growing old,
I hope you find your match,
Someone heartless like you,
I'm happy to remain,
'The one you never knew.'

Copyright © Bexstasy ... [ 2010-11-15 04:48:43]
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Re: The one you never knew. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 08:52:09 AM AEST
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Well done, i enjoyed reading keep up the good work :)

Re: The one you never knew. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 03:32:14 PM AEST
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I think we all can relate to this write in one way or the other.
Actually it's been pretty much the story of my life.
Great write.
blessings,
emy

Re: The one you never knew. (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 04:35:40 AM AEST
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Nice really nice liked the write alot keep writing.

Re: The one you never knew. (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:20:18 PM AEST
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Always lovely to read your poems. So full of emotions, it's great to try and read between the lines. This guy didn't obviously care about anyone but himself, so certainly the right choice to say, 'Bye-bye'!!
Take care, Chris.

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