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Right Now
Contributed by
JAlexandra
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 05:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Completely overwhelmed with what life has, right now
Dont know what to make of where things are at, right now
Aspirations for life, nowhere in sight, right now
No energy to put up a good fight, lights out
Struggling with thoughts of how to end the pain
Contemplating a bullet inside my brain
Want to take a knife straight through my veins
Asphyxiation with a cord to constrain my breath
Emerging thoughts of what death will bring
Do I cling to life or just let it go
Anxiety eating away at my soul, right now
Will I suffer even more where I end up, then where Im at right now?
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JAlexandra
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2010-11-16 17:45:33]
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Re: Right Now
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 09:56:11 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Wow this is very sad but I can relate. I take meds and life is much more pleasant.
Check with your Dr. It's amazing how much two pills a day can make a huge difference.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Right Now
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 11:12:20 PM AEST
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| i have also felt this way and im sorry you are going through it, keep your chin up and there will be brighter days ahead even if it never seems that way. great poem. |
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Re: Right Now
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by duff on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 12:58:06 PM AEST
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A tragic read that breaks hearts. The topic is gut wrenching but the piece is very well written and the imagery is vivid. Well written.
duff
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Re: Right Now
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by JohnnyFallen on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 07:30:33 PM AEST
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| A pain that sends thoughts going through my mind. Very descriptive on the agony. I like it. |
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Re: Right Now
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 22nd November 2010 @ 12:11:45 AM AEST
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turn your mind away from sad thought,
i think, my friend you may have forgot,
that life is grand, and we can always escape,
to another time, or another place.
At the end of life is uncertainty,
and only in life... are we truly free.
Free to change and free to roam,
Free to find new loves and new homes.
Free to seize a beautiful day,
because only circumstance,
makes you feel this way. |
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Re: Right Now
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by shereal_14 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 06:51:56 PM AEST
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Well, If this poem is about yourself all I have to say is I know how you feel, but take it from me things will get better eventually. Keep your head up. Very good write, though sad. Hope things get better for you.
Sheryl |
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