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Array ( [sid] => 163448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused Hearts [time] => 2010-11-27 22:51:31 [hometext] => I wrote this for my bestfriend during her time of heartbreak. I didn't know that it would eventually relate to me. [bodytext] => Romeo and Juliet i bet
Never had it this tough
You havent decided yet
So Im calling your bluff
You say Im your love
Promising me forever
Im all you think of
Your words are clever

Now my heart is shattered
With no one to catch the pieces
To you nothing ever mattered
My thoughts of you increases

You murdered my pulsing heart
Cracked it with a solid bat
Love was fake from the start
I was your backup doormat
At twelve the clock will chime
My uncanny emotions are mixing
Youve wasted too much time
My heart requires fixing

Now my heart is shattered
With no one to catch the pieces
To you nothing ever mattered
My thoughts of you increases
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Confused Hearts

Contributed by whitt on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 10:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Romeo and Juliet i bet
Never had it this tough
You havent decided yet
So Im calling your bluff
You say Im your love
Promising me forever
Im all you think of
Your words are clever

Now my heart is shattered
With no one to catch the pieces
To you nothing ever mattered
My thoughts of you increases

You murdered my pulsing heart
Cracked it with a solid bat
Love was fake from the start
I was your backup doormat
At twelve the clock will chime
My uncanny emotions are mixing
Youve wasted too much time
My heart requires fixing

Now my heart is shattered
With no one to catch the pieces
To you nothing ever mattered
My thoughts of you increases

Copyright © whitt ... [ 2010-11-27 22:51:31]
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Re: Confused Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Sad but great writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: Confused Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by nrazak1 on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 03:17:07 PM AEST
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Very sad and touching.
It has such a deep meaning.!
Good work!

Re: Confused Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 04:14:47 PM AEST
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I have written many poems about love recently, and I really like this one. It really captures the feeling. It seems that loyalty does not come from promises, but from character.

Re: Confused Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 02:11:59 AM AEST
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This is full of deep emotion, slightly sad but very well written, a joy to read.

Re: Confused Hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Nonefound on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 11:16:35 PM AEST
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lovely well written I've been there to.

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