Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 11:25:59 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 163473 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out of the Darkness [time] => 2010-11-30 01:07:00 [hometext] => All we need is love to find ourselves again. In the poem it is a woman I speak of, but this applies to every person who has ever been hurt or lost. [bodytext] => Smooth red sheets upon her skin
A tempered beauty deep within,
Atop a heap of tender silk,
And like a rose, her heart does wilt,

Her petals float and gently soar,
And when they land upon the shore,
The tender waves will carry them,
Up to a dark and shadowed glen,

And it is there that they will find,
A beauty that lies deep inside,
Her shattered heart is waiting there,
And it may seem beyond repair,

But in the black of darkest night,
Your love will help her find the light.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 2 [informant] => deusdeira [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Out of the Darkness

Contributed by deusdeira on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 01:07:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Smooth red sheets upon her skin
A tempered beauty deep within,
Atop a heap of tender silk,
And like a rose, her heart does wilt,

Her petals float and gently soar,
And when they land upon the shore,
The tender waves will carry them,
Up to a dark and shadowed glen,

And it is there that they will find,
A beauty that lies deep inside,
Her shattered heart is waiting there,
And it may seem beyond repair,

But in the black of darkest night,
Your love will help her find the light.

Copyright © deusdeira ... [ 2010-11-30 01:07:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Out of the Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 02:58:54 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Another good write.
Blessings,
emy

Re: Out of the Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Fern on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 06:08:16 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This poem has beauty, rhythm, and a wonderful almost hypnotic cadence. What I think your stunning, and dare I say "glorious" poem implies is: HOPE! DON'T GIVE UP, MY DARLING! I'M COMING FOR YOU! That and more. Your concluding lines reach beyond the normal bounds of beauty and truth as we know it...they are SPELLBINDING! "But in the black of darkest night...your love will help her find the light." My God, this is an incredible poem that you have constructed. Your audience begs for more from you!

Re: Out of the Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jonathon_J_Young on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 01:57:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wicked stuff! good work!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com