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Unburden, and the world seeks
Definition.
From the tiniest imprint of blackbirds' path to the
Indelible
Footprint of Mankind.
Every rooftop tile to the tip of
Tiny twig.
Nature breathes
And noses blush,
As she sighs in the morrow
Where untouched blankets
Glisten, waiting,
Tranquility!
Inside the glow of childhood resurfaces,
The beauty
Brings me to life,
Awakens!
Evergreens perfectly formed,
Oaks gnarled and twisted.
And the magic!
Where forests become kingdoms,
And mere mortals become kings and queens,
And life leaves its pattern,
A fleeting moment
The design melts,
We were never here!
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Definition

Contributed by northernlights on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 03:35:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Heavy clouds
Unburden, and the world seeks
Definition.
From the tiniest imprint of blackbirds' path to the
Indelible
Footprint of Mankind.
Every rooftop tile to the tip of
Tiny twig.
Nature breathes
And noses blush,
As she sighs in the morrow
Where untouched blankets
Glisten, waiting,
Tranquility!
Inside the glow of childhood resurfaces,
The beauty
Brings me to life,
Awakens!
Evergreens perfectly formed,
Oaks gnarled and twisted.
And the magic!
Where forests become kingdoms,
And mere mortals become kings and queens,
And life leaves its pattern,
A fleeting moment
The design melts,
We were never here!

Copyright © northernlights ... [ 2010-11-30 03:35:54]
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Re: Definition (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 04:00:59 AM AEST
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nice

Re: Definition (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 04:19:29 AM AEST
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very good.you've really caught the feeling as I look out the window at the Welsh mountains.

Re: Definition (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 09:00:27 AM AEST
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ohhhh..this is the most beautifull poem i have read in a very long time. i absolutely adore it! the end just leaves you breathless and imagining the veiw..i live in florida so i rarely get to see things melt, but this brought me home to Maryland..it really did...thank you so much..
"Evergreens perfectly formed,
Oaks gnarled and twisted.
And the magic!
where forests become kingdoms,
and mere mortals become kings and queens,
and life leaves it's pattern,
A fleeting moment
the design melts,
We were never here!"

so beautifull...i can't stop reading it.

Re: Definition (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 02:09:33 AM AEST
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Okay, so like this is what I get out of this. Yes, beauty in every sense of the word yet, it also seems to make a very bold profound statement how miniscule we all are in the vastness of this huge universe. we really think we're something, don't we? Well, we are but a speck, a spot of dust to be lost in immense creation of God.

But then again, I may have missed it completely Smile!

Smile!

but still love it.

Thank you,

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

Re: Definition (User Rating: 1 )
by mehuel on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 08:49:47 AM AEST
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goodness, all of the lifes cycle circled in, around beauty, from life to death, one and only quest.. Felicity.. Intense.. Loved it..

Re: Definition (User Rating: 1 )
by Jonathon_J_Young on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 01:54:19 PM AEST
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not bad. :)

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