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Array ( [sid] => 163501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can You Tell ? [time] => 2010-12-01 09:31:03 [hometext] => This is for the girl I have loved for more than 25 years without her knowing > Whom I have finnally been reunited with and now sees my heart .Laura , I love you ! [bodytext] => Ask me once, how can you tell ?
How do you know?
I'll tell you , it's a feeling of being lost yet found at the same time.
I'll say it's like comming home after a long journey.
I'll tell you it's waking in the night with you're name on my lips.
I'll hint that the feeling of completeness resides in your smile.
I'll suggest that being close to you both terrifies and thrills me at the same time.
I'll say this thing between us, this link This feeling that drives me to be both hero and fool,
that tells me I can be more, is your love .
How can you tell ?
It's remembering to breathe when kissing you .
It's having to force myself to look away from your eyes.
It's poetry in the middle of the night.
It's a never ending list of the ways I love you.
I love you with every breath in my lungs and beat of my heart . [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tomtom40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Can You Tell ?

Contributed by tomtom40 on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:31:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Ask me once, how can you tell ?
How do you know?
I'll tell you , it's a feeling of being lost yet found at the same time.
I'll say it's like comming home after a long journey.
I'll tell you it's waking in the night with you're name on my lips.
I'll hint that the feeling of completeness resides in your smile.
I'll suggest that being close to you both terrifies and thrills me at the same time.
I'll say this thing between us, this link This feeling that drives me to be both hero and fool,
that tells me I can be more, is your love .
How can you tell ?
It's remembering to breathe when kissing you .
It's having to force myself to look away from your eyes.
It's poetry in the middle of the night.
It's a never ending list of the ways I love you.
I love you with every breath in my lungs and beat of my heart .

Copyright © tomtom40 ... [ 2010-12-01 09:31:03]
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Re: Can You Tell ? (User Rating: 1 )
by Nonefound on Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 11:09:26 PM AEST
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beautiful well written, lucky Laura that is really capturing love, in words.

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