Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 13:30:10 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 163622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shelter [time] => 2010-12-09 19:58:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As my perplexed pen pervades the perfection of my play,
I think.

Not of a time where simple thoughts trembled upon the trumpeting of the word,
A call of corrupted memories, ageing authority and self-righteous rhythm,
Where ignorance drifted aimlessly among me.

Not of a time where the scars of tomorrow were restrained behind her veil,
Comforted by the prevailing glow of her luminescent beauty,
They were happy then.

Nor of a time where bitter was sweet and the revolution of time was open for another,
When a flourishing idea was nurtured through water and sun,
Shunned by no creature.

I think.

A time where wings crumble against the grasp of thought,
A confirmation of an incomplete destiny.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 64 [informant] => UAnwar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Shelter

Contributed by UAnwar on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:58:41 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

As my perplexed pen pervades the perfection of my play,
I think.

Not of a time where simple thoughts trembled upon the trumpeting of the word,
A call of corrupted memories, ageing authority and self-righteous rhythm,
Where ignorance drifted aimlessly among me.

Not of a time where the scars of tomorrow were restrained behind her veil,
Comforted by the prevailing glow of her luminescent beauty,
They were happy then.

Nor of a time where bitter was sweet and the revolution of time was open for another,
When a flourishing idea was nurtured through water and sun,
Shunned by no creature.

I think.

A time where wings crumble against the grasp of thought,
A confirmation of an incomplete destiny.

Copyright © UAnwar ... [ 2010-12-09 19:58:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Shelter (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:31:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hey Anwar its very different piece of work.
Very nice, interesting and a cool one.

Take care
Anbarean

Re: Shelter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:34:28 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Welcome to YPDC.
Good writing.
blessings,
emy

Re: Shelter (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 10:39:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

excellent rhythm and flow..........

Re: Shelter (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 12:25:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

A time where wings crumble........ an incomplete destiny,there's a softness and tenderness behind the writing that brings a comfort to hear the words and thoughts,gently reminiscent,then the last two lines powerfully bringing focus and sharpness as the image is destructive and mournful,beautiful and expressive

Re: Shelter (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:18:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This line speaks volumes;
'A time where wings crumble against the grasp of thought,
A confirmation of an incomplete destiny.'

Keep writing...

ming

Re: Shelter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 04:38:36 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Sorry it's taking me this long to respond to this awesome write.
Blessings,
emy

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com