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Isn't It Unbelievable
Contributed by
JohnnyFallen
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Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 07:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Isn't it unbelievable? You broke my heart, I told you all of my past You shattered it, like a moment at last You breathed it in, and exhaled so fast Isn't unbelievable? You don't need me, and I don't need you You don't want me, hurts to know that's true You don't care about me, breaks me in two Isn't it unbelievable? I loved you, now I care less Of where you are, you made me feel like a mess Looking back, I regret our caress
Drowning in my tears Kill me with my fears Please deafen my ears
Isn't it unbelievable? I live as if I'm dead, walking in the cold I look onto you in dread, my screams getting old You're deceiving has been fed, soon my story will unfold Isn't it unbelievable? You apologized and I forgave I'm neutralized in a lonely cave Feeling mortalized with wounds I cannot bathe Isn't it unbelievable? You inflected a scar I cannot heal Now feeling far, it cannot be real My heart trapped in tar, you cannot feel
Suicide I do not dare to try Even if you don't care to cry Sweated blood drips from my hair and I sigh
Isn't it unbelievable? The depression of it all?
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Re: Isn't It Unbelievable
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 08:48:52 PM AEST (User
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Oh yes it is unbelievable..for the beautiful way of expressing....and rhyming as well
very good one
takecare
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Re: Isn't It Unbelievable
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nobleclint on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 09:47:14 PM AEST (User
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While readin I felt your lyrics like reality,woah it's truly unbelievable! |
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