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[sid] => 163674
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Love or Chemistry
[time] => 2010-12-13 00:45:48
[hometext] => I'd like critiques such as 'this line is good' or 'maybe structure this part like this' or 'lose this line altogether'. Hopefully there's something to work with here. I am ok with abandoning this entirely and working on another. Thanks! - Hacktastic
[bodytext] => Do you call it Love or chemistry? It is in our hands and on our hearts. I see how your eyes sparkle when I look at you. Your lips, thrilled and hungry as mine touch yours, taste of sweet affection and desire. Hear the laughter when we are together I imagine your voice, your touch, your scent, your mouth, All sweet, soft and lovely - just as you are. Reach for my hand and hold my heart. You kiss my lips and thrill my soul. You call me "love" and I am yours, I am yours. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 325 [topic] => 2 [informant] => hacktastic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 72 [ratings] => 17 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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