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Array ( [sid] => 163754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What You Do [time] => 2010-12-16 20:45:42 [hometext] => I was bored in class and it just came to me. lol i would lovee to hear your thoughts on it. [bodytext] => So give me your watch
and smash it into pieces
because not a minute goes by
that I want you to know
there isn't a day
with you not in my mind
like time doesn't exist
becasue when I'm with you
it all stands still
feels like I've known you a lifetime
constantly thinking
how did this happen to me
you came upon me unexpectedly
but I'm so glad that it hapenned
I dont know where I'd be
without you here by my side
It's like we flew into
our cloud of destiny
totally zoned out
when I look into your eyes
I don't hear anyone else
when it's you on my mind
you got me so distracted
I don't know what to do
except,
maybe say,
I love you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 2 [informant] => cait [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

What You Do

Contributed by cait on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 08:45:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

So give me your watch
and smash it into pieces
because not a minute goes by
that I want you to know
there isn't a day
with you not in my mind
like time doesn't exist
becasue when I'm with you
it all stands still
feels like I've known you a lifetime
constantly thinking
how did this happen to me
you came upon me unexpectedly
but I'm so glad that it hapenned
I dont know where I'd be
without you here by my side
It's like we flew into
our cloud of destiny
totally zoned out
when I look into your eyes
I don't hear anyone else
when it's you on my mind
you got me so distracted
I don't know what to do
except,
maybe say,
I love you.

Copyright © cait ... [ 2010-12-16 20:45:42]
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Re: What You Do (User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 11:18:47 PM AEST
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aaawww so cute.. i like the way you express your love...
Great work
Take care
Anbarean

Re: What You Do (User Rating: 1 )
by huwbeauty on Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 03:22:49 AM AEST
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really good write,great but hard work when someones on your mind all the time.

Re: What You Do (User Rating: 1 )
by cait on Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 07:42:09 PM AEST
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thanks guys! i love feedback.

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