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I am a work in progress
Contributed by
brasco
on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 07:40:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I am a work in progress
I have desires unfit for common men
I have placed myself as if a Lord
Yet rule my life to no avail
I am a wretch but more a fool
Laying waste to mine own house
Dear I seek the Masters hand
Dear I hope for a Redeemer
May an unbeliever call His Name
Will He hear the cry of a doubting heart
Can a skeptics prayers float above rafter
Should I stay my unworthy tongue
Still I must beseech the Master Forger
May His bellows crack the fires to a roar
Then beat and fashion this broken form
A noble son to serve his Sovereign Lord
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2010-12-27 07:40:44]
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Re: I am a work in progress
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 12:26:28 PM AEST
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| Come to think of it we are all a big load of paper work in progress... |
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Re: I am a work in progress
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 02:28:05 PM AEST
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InnerVisions of a modern man
well done. |
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Re: I am a work in progress
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by Voyager on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 06:39:35 PM AEST
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"May an unbeliever call His Name
Will He hear the cry of a doubting heart"
That was a great line...kinda summed it up for me. The difficulty of faith in an age of science. Great poem. I can relate fully. |
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