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Another breath from which to make,
Rash conclusions to forsake,
Life itself with my mistake;
You could tell led to heartache.

I try so hard to hide the pain,
Nevertheless, it feels constrained.

This dark is so inviting; it’s where I’m meant to be.
Hellish thoughts of who I am and violent imagery;
Eradicates all of my soul and takes all my esprit.

Malevolent in my tendencies,
Open to atrocities,
Unnegated misery,
Rambunctious informalities;
Neglecting all that’s dear to me,
I need to be set free.
Now let me go and bring me death,
Gently kiss me till my last breath.
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Early In the Mourning

Contributed by Jonathon_J_Young on Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 11:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Embedded by my sins I wake,
Another breath from which to make,
Rash conclusions to forsake,
Life itself with my mistake;
You could tell led to heartache.

I try so hard to hide the pain,
Nevertheless, it feels constrained.

This dark is so inviting; it’s where I’m meant to be.
Hellish thoughts of who I am and violent imagery;
Eradicates all of my soul and takes all my esprit.

Malevolent in my tendencies,
Open to atrocities,
Unnegated misery,
Rambunctious informalities;
Neglecting all that’s dear to me,
I need to be set free.
Now let me go and bring me death,
Gently kiss me till my last breath.

Copyright Â© Jonathon_J_Young ... [ 2010-12-30 23:51:55]
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Re: Early In the Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 12:09:00 AM AEST
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Interesting. I feel a connection to parts of this poem, while others seem strange and foreign. A little troubling, really, but I enjoyed the read.

Re: Early In the Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 12:39:08 AM AEST
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very well written. The last two lines reverberate power to the entire poem. Nice flow as well.

Re: Early In the Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 04:23:20 AM AEST
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This is faintly disturbing but very well written. You have a nice way with words that seem to flow effortlessly off the page. Well done, look forward to more.

Re: Early In the Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Darbi on Monday, 10th January 2011 @ 07:21:17 PM AEST
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I agree with all of the comments above. Very powerful and precise.

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