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I'm Sorry
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 07:39:21 AM in AEST
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I'm Sorry
Really sorry
Looking at your
Purple, Yellow and Swolen face
I'm Sorry
I Never Travelled from
Town to Town
School to School
I'm Sorry
I Had food to eat
Every night
Great parents
Which
You never had
Never had to pick up
Pieces of my life
Never had to beg for mercy
Like i've seen with you
Time after Time
If i could have
Granted you one wish
That's to have your
Childhood life over again
With parents like mine
I'm sorry i could never feel your pain
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-01-04 07:39:21]
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 10:47:07 AM AEST
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| It was a nice poem, you must understand that even in those moments of hell it brings the person out with a stronger purpose in life. We didn't have a choice on where we were born so there is no need to say your sorry. Still a nice write. |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by nrazak1 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2011 @ 07:15:48 PM AEST
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Wow
That was really touching.
I kinda feel the same way every time i think about my life and what i have. It makes me feel guilty.
Very emotional! |
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by Anoo on
Thursday, 10th February 2011 @ 02:25:16 AM AEST
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Heartfelt and simple. 'I'm sorry i could never feel your pain' The verse is ironical and shows how much the poet feels the pain of the children growing up without love and affection.
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Re: I'm Sorry
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by longago on
Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 05:29:32 PM AEST
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| wow, such a deep and thoughtful topic, so many people go through life never thinking of anyone but themselves so its genuinely refreshing to read somthing like this...well done |
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