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Balcony winds twisting through daisies

Eyes mourning sun drenched panes

Hands tremble disconnecting calls

Kerouac flashbacks and diner black

Sleepy bottles hide bedside faith

Ocean eyes broker a trade for pain

Medicating pressure to breathe again

Punctuality parallel to the velvet noose

Below marquis lights soul shakers snap

You’re a star waiting to shoot someone
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Spirals

Contributed by duff on Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 01:33:12 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Rented pillows cuddling chocolate

Balcony winds twisting through daisies

Eyes mourning sun drenched panes

Hands tremble disconnecting calls

Kerouac flashbacks and diner black

Sleepy bottles hide bedside faith

Ocean eyes broker a trade for pain

Medicating pressure to breathe again

Punctuality parallel to the velvet noose

Below marquis lights soul shakers snap

You’re a star waiting to shoot someone

Copyright Â© duff ... [ 2011-01-05 01:33:12]
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Re: Spirals (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 02:06:34 AM AEST
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Hmmmm...it's definitely living up to the title, at least for me, as I can feel this "spiral" effect...even if I don't really understand it.

Thanks,

Tim

Re: Spirals (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 05:34:37 AM AEST
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where do I start well i absolutely love and respect the way you write,and the depth of this writing is wonderful a whole onion of unravelling in imagery to be done whilst the whole picture unashamedly reflects your soul,this one I think is one of the rare writes attributed to a writer when they write in their own blood,a complete gamut of emotion from emptiness to inner struggle through pain to anger and then?

Re: Spirals (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 12:23:55 PM AEST
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A marvelous and intricate passage
the depths to which the human soul can spiral is beyond us
This write relative everyone
despair and emptiness are lonely dark places
where crutches are so inviting
the scene was depicted so thoroughly while it became so vivid to read
well versed,nicely delivered

-UNORTHODOX

Re: Spirals (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 01:02:35 PM AEST
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'Spirals' has received much well-deserved praise. Can i add anything to it? Well, I can say the poem ripped me apart and the last line really 'shot' through me; and that the images are so profound I think i could read this poem many many times before 'seeing' them all -- if ever I could do that. You have a special way with words. A style. You have a singular style.

--FlintHunter

Contributed by duff on Wednesday, January 05 2011 @ 01:33:12 AEST
Topic: Emotional Poetry

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