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Array ( [sid] => 164121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Minute Insight [time] => 2011-01-05 16:02:07 [hometext] => Part of an anthology. The theme is Into the Unknown [bodytext] => I still remember those days.
When the sky seemed blue,
And the flowers remained straight.

Silly thoughts, silly settings all seems now.
The vast world around me is amazing,
but I couldn't care any less.

I want to drift myself
To the never ending sleep.
But the time has yet to come.

I guess he needs to see me suffer first.
And he needs to make me hate myself,
So I will kneel and show some regret,
Asking and finding forgiveness.

Then the smiles shall fade.
They'll be replaced with guilt tears,
Accompanied by hours and hours of grief
And ever lasting memories.

Now I really know what it truly feels to be alone.
And suddenly I feel afraid.

So many questions remain unknown.
But I guess that's his will after all.
The time finally comes.
Apparently the battle has been won.
With mix of emotions
And nothing else to weep
I finally go to sleep.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 39 [informant] => rowenm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Last Minute Insight

Contributed by rowenm on Wednesday, 5th January 2011 @ 04:02:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I still remember those days.
When the sky seemed blue,
And the flowers remained straight.

Silly thoughts, silly settings all seems now.
The vast world around me is amazing,
but I couldn't care any less.

I want to drift myself
To the never ending sleep.
But the time has yet to come.

I guess he needs to see me suffer first.
And he needs to make me hate myself,
So I will kneel and show some regret,
Asking and finding forgiveness.

Then the smiles shall fade.
They'll be replaced with guilt tears,
Accompanied by hours and hours of grief
And ever lasting memories.

Now I really know what it truly feels to be alone.
And suddenly I feel afraid.

So many questions remain unknown.
But I guess that's his will after all.
The time finally comes.
Apparently the battle has been won.
With mix of emotions
And nothing else to weep
I finally go to sleep.

Copyright © rowenm ... [ 2011-01-05 16:02:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Last Minute Insight (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Friday, 7th January 2011 @ 05:14:05 AM AEST
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So open and honest an account from warm reminiscing to giving up and self deprecating,to acceptance and the longing for an end to the struggle.....apparently the battle has been won..... an open question for the next write,full of sensitivity,well written

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