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Array ( [sid] => 164164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The birth of a new year [time] => 2011-01-08 14:16:24 [hometext] => Me and my friend andre came together and wanted to write a poem about the new year [bodytext] => 2011 How I prayed for you
A fresh start to end all the lost thoughts
In this silky web which we decend
I have no heart
I gave it all to sin


The scars become scraches thanks to you
The judges that crowded my sky
I now tuck away in my pillow
To sleep on and to leave in rest
Left for the morning desert
This spirtual bondage
In which dust from the un found tombs arose
I cower into the planes
Forgetting all who have hurt me


With god in hand
Prdestination calls
Fast as lighting I will prevail


Force becomes emotion
I arise above the sands past time
Swolling the distant hurt left behined
Here I am.....


They always Say good things don't last
Time to see a golden future , and leave the sour past
leading a change is the worlds glory
The best time to open up a new story
I am a new man ina new year
as I spit these words you should hear
I was ounce a boy, now I am a man
which no one seems to understand
I see fear coming at its best
Then I know lifes hitting me in the chest
people trying to be funny and act clever
telling me to stand down I said never



A giver never a taker
And to fake would be a gahstly mistake
Because I long for change
In this real world
We feel real pain..
inevedible in its shade
Conjured to test us in our deepest pain


finding this damsill in distress
Put my hurt to rest
The grey areas dwarfed in magnificent rainbow


Frustration and anger was all I had
feeling all blue and sad
2011 I would like to experience real love
Not to be bullied or shoved
All I got is my paper and pen
And my people who will start to listen
I feel like the world is to blame
For making me feel all this shame
will people stop looking at me strange
As in now it is time for change


A new beggning is all need
A book with endless pages
unfilled and and cover less
now please take my hand
cusp it tight
This journy we are about to embark
will tempt this fresh start [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 14 [informant] => hungarianhaze [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
The birth of a new year

Contributed by hungarianhaze on Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 02:16:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



2011 How I prayed for you
A fresh start to end all the lost thoughts
In this silky web which we decend
I have no heart
I gave it all to sin


The scars become scraches thanks to you
The judges that crowded my sky
I now tuck away in my pillow
To sleep on and to leave in rest
Left for the morning desert
This spirtual bondage
In which dust from the un found tombs arose
I cower into the planes
Forgetting all who have hurt me


With god in hand
Prdestination calls
Fast as lighting I will prevail


Force becomes emotion
I arise above the sands past time
Swolling the distant hurt left behined
Here I am.....


They always Say good things don't last
Time to see a golden future , and leave the sour past
leading a change is the worlds glory
The best time to open up a new story
I am a new man ina new year
as I spit these words you should hear
I was ounce a boy, now I am a man
which no one seems to understand
I see fear coming at its best
Then I know lifes hitting me in the chest
people trying to be funny and act clever
telling me to stand down I said never



A giver never a taker
And to fake would be a gahstly mistake
Because I long for change
In this real world
We feel real pain..
inevedible in its shade
Conjured to test us in our deepest pain


finding this damsill in distress
Put my hurt to rest
The grey areas dwarfed in magnificent rainbow


Frustration and anger was all I had
feeling all blue and sad
2011 I would like to experience real love
Not to be bullied or shoved
All I got is my paper and pen
And my people who will start to listen
I feel like the world is to blame
For making me feel all this shame
will people stop looking at me strange
As in now it is time for change


A new beggning is all need
A book with endless pages
unfilled and and cover less
now please take my hand
cusp it tight
This journy we are about to embark
will tempt this fresh start




Copyright © hungarianhaze ... [ 2011-01-08 14:16:24]
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Re: The birth of a new year (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 02:55:09 PM AEST
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Wow,
this is a beautiful masterpiece.
You both did great. I can't tell when one leaves and the other takes off.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: The birth of a new year (User Rating: 1 )
by JohnnyFallen on Saturday, 8th January 2011 @ 05:08:55 PM AEST
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Great writing. :)




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