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is like finding something
different inside I never knew

You break me down and can
Build me up
You can make me frown
yet you fill my cup

You make me cry and you make
me laugh too
Being in your arms takes away
all thats blue

Finding me in you is like finding
something I thought I lost
Finding me in you is like
a new me Ive come across

Finding me in you makes me
wonder who I really am
Why you love me so
I can never understand

I'm broken I'm a mess
this is not what I see in you
So how can two so different
be alike in what we do

Finding me in you is like
losing myself
Yet finding me in you
is something Ive never felt

Finding me in you
is finding me for the first time
I hope I never lose me again
I am so glad you are mine....
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => vr91476 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Finding Me In You

Contributed by vr91476 on Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 04:04:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Finding me in you
is like finding something
different inside I never knew

You break me down and can
Build me up
You can make me frown
yet you fill my cup

You make me cry and you make
me laugh too
Being in your arms takes away
all thats blue

Finding me in you is like finding
something I thought I lost
Finding me in you is like
a new me Ive come across

Finding me in you makes me
wonder who I really am
Why you love me so
I can never understand

I'm broken I'm a mess
this is not what I see in you
So how can two so different
be alike in what we do

Finding me in you is like
losing myself
Yet finding me in you
is something Ive never felt

Finding me in you
is finding me for the first time
I hope I never lose me again
I am so glad you are mine....

Copyright Â© vr91476 ... [ 2011-01-13 04:04:20]
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Re: Finding Me In You (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 03:37:30 PM AEST
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i really like this poem. light but deep. I sense a need for something you never knew you needed until you met it. The pain of love in a nutshell

Re: Finding Me In You (User Rating: 1 )
by monashendy on Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 03:46:36 PM AEST
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I liked it sooooooo, great one :)

Re: Finding Me In You (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 13th January 2011 @ 11:44:28 PM AEST
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nicely written, your words flow well and you convey your feelings that i can relate with.

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