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Array ( [sid] => 164470 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => puppetry [time] => 2011-01-26 02:31:24 [hometext] => A deep but dark poem in a way. My soul types, i just watch. [bodytext] => Darkness fallows me around
extinguishing all light ive found
I wait for you in emptyness
hiding from the unknown bliss
bring your sorrow and it's pain
hiding from the truth again

look to brighter days you say
As I watch the past decay
i've strangled tears far to long
darkness is where i place my hate
take your time, contemplate
speak your vows to deceive
your cloaks of clever words assure
I won't be your destiny


Close your mind, free your soul
it matters no more
speak your poison in my ear
misconcepted dreams I hear
devistating mental war
but I'm in control


It makes you mad
It makes you hate
Why don't you just accept your fate
You've fallowed me around to long
years have made you headstrong
pull your strings of puppetry
no more will your toys dance or sing
layed to rest my chains have been
now your free to play again [comments] => 2 [counter] => 132 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nomad [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
puppetry

Contributed by nomad on Wednesday, 26th January 2011 @ 02:31:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Darkness fallows me around
extinguishing all light ive found
I wait for you in emptyness
hiding from the unknown bliss
bring your sorrow and it's pain
hiding from the truth again

look to brighter days you say
As I watch the past decay
i've strangled tears far to long
darkness is where i place my hate
take your time, contemplate
speak your vows to deceive
your cloaks of clever words assure
I won't be your destiny


Close your mind, free your soul
it matters no more
speak your poison in my ear
misconcepted dreams I hear
devistating mental war
but I'm in control


It makes you mad
It makes you hate
Why don't you just accept your fate
You've fallowed me around to long
years have made you headstrong
pull your strings of puppetry
no more will your toys dance or sing
layed to rest my chains have been
now your free to play again




Copyright © nomad ... [ 2011-01-26 02:31:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: puppetry (User Rating: 1 )
by RachelSixx on Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 07:15:05 PM AEST
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beautifully dark, i love it!


Re: puppetry (User Rating: 1 )
by xnickix7 on Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 08:55:31 PM AEST
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Great piece. I like how you were able to rhyme in several of your lines. I'm very partial to that style of writing.




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