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anonymous
Contributed by
elle
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Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 04:37:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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our love was anonymous for a long time.
it left us small notes
unsigned & scattered throughout our days
untitled melodies
it played to us
all those unmarked roads
winding & turning back on themselves,
it led us down
if love hadn't been so persistent
what we have might not be at all. . .
I might not know
the thrill of you
Copyright ©
elle
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2011-01-28 04:37:46]
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Re: anonymous
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by duff on
Friday, 28th January 2011 @ 02:29:22 PM AEST
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I adore your writing elle. There is a such a mystique in your pen that grips the reader to the very end. Waiting there is possibility daring hearts to run with it. Fantastic job as always.
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Re: anonymous
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 02:40:51 AM AEST
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Elle
this is a wonderful write. One of the best I have read here in a long time. Very strong yet easy on the mind. Well done. |
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Re: anonymous
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by Spike on
Saturday, 29th January 2011 @ 08:39:26 PM AEST
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nice one, elle. Love building in increments seems to be more stable and long lasting that the wham bam, over the moon stuff.
And the hints and whispers, as you describe, do seem to patiently wait for the slow dawning of recognition.
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Re: anonymous
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 04:13:17 AM AEST
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Re: anonymous
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by Xnoybis on
Sunday, 30th January 2011 @ 06:14:27 AM AEST
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| Short, sharp..poignant. I liked it. |
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Re: anonymous
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by ming on
Friday, 4th February 2011 @ 09:03:38 AM AEST
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Dear Elle,
I love how love has it own persona in this poem;
'it left us small notes
unsigned & scattered throughout our days'
'it played to us'
Awesome!
ming
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