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Array ( [sid] => 164733 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Give Up On Me [time] => 2011-02-12 12:40:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm not a perfect person,
I need to think clearly, I can't let myself worsen.
Life as of now is a half-empty cup,
how will I ever catch up?
Don't give up on me.

I've given my soul away to the devil;
never thought I'd get down to that level.
Innocence is lost,
lines have been crossed.
Please, don't give up on me.

At times I've done wrong from feeling deranged,
but everyone deserves their chance to change.
There are better paths that I should choose,
because this isn't something I want to lose.
Baby please, don't give up on me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 64 [informant] => allie_07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Don't Give Up On Me

Contributed by allie_07 on Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 12:40:49 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

I'm not a perfect person,
I need to think clearly, I can't let myself worsen.
Life as of now is a half-empty cup,
how will I ever catch up?
Don't give up on me.

I've given my soul away to the devil;
never thought I'd get down to that level.
Innocence is lost,
lines have been crossed.
Please, don't give up on me.

At times I've done wrong from feeling deranged,
but everyone deserves their chance to change.
There are better paths that I should choose,
because this isn't something I want to lose.
Baby please, don't give up on me.

Copyright © allie_07 ... [ 2011-02-12 12:40:49]
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Re: Don't Give Up On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 12:46:12 PM AEST
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Your poem is very heartfelt and i believe we all become this way at times. Your lover should appreciate you for your openness about this. I hope all goes well,
Deidra

Re: Don't Give Up On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Saturday, 12th February 2011 @ 04:24:01 PM AEST
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Thats lovley, really how I feel at time...
Great last lines, Dont Give Up On Me... x x
I hope the best things come your way x x

Re: Don't Give Up On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetryislife on Thursday, 17th May 2012 @ 01:16:42 PM AEST
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This is my opinion and I am not a professional in writing poetry, but your poem is very nice and I remember what you have mentioned in your poem " Any person is not perfect" as well as you have indicated that " everyone needs a chance". Again, YOU are an extremely good poet.

Poetryislife

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