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Kill Me To Keep Me.
Contributed by
CommasCanSeperate
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Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 05:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The poem says it all::
Hold me close and never let go
Dont let this unravel and unfold
This is something I will fight for, something I desire
Something, the one thing that lights my fire
I hug you too much, Im all over youre like a rash
But Im afraid to let go, in case you make a dash
I will push you away with all my might
Yet dont give in, give me a fight
Show me you want me and would kill me to keep me
All I want is for somewhere I can be free
I know I dont respect you, theres a line in the sand
And I cross that line again, again, Im soon damned
I wish I could let you go, but Ive got an addiction
My heart and my brain are in utter confliction
Tears because of you and your tender touch
That as I lie alone again tonight, I miss so much
I wish you were here, youre only metres away
I want a guarantee, you will always stay::
Im sorry for how much I love you. I know it is overwhelming
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Re: Kill Me To Keep Me.
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by StacyLynnG on
Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 07:58:08 AM AEST
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| Nicely expressed, I felt suffocated just reading that |
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Re: Kill Me To Keep Me.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2011 @ 09:35:22 AM AEST
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| this is VERY good! I love how you wrote it and it is very sweet and kind. |
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