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Blank pages lurk in an existential void,
Just as written pages remain pathetically filled-up,
Suffocated to numerous reading eyes.

No thing ever changes, essentially.
The long night grumbles in darkness.
A foggy morning delays the early air-traffic.

Come, change me, if you think you can.
Sincerely yours, an inessential man. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 64 [informant] => nirupam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Inessential Man

Contributed by nirupam on Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 11:09:40 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Nothing changes ever, essentially.
Blank pages lurk in an existential void,
Just as written pages remain pathetically filled-up,
Suffocated to numerous reading eyes.

No thing ever changes, essentially.
The long night grumbles in darkness.
A foggy morning delays the early air-traffic.

Come, change me, if you think you can.
Sincerely yours, an inessential man.

Copyright © nirupam ... [ 2011-02-20 11:09:40]
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Re: Inessential Man (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th February 2011 @ 05:33:30 PM AEST
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Come, change me, if you think you can.
Sincerely yours, an inessential man.

Great write and the above lines really put it like it is and that's awesome.
Big blessings,
emy

Re: Inessential Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Monday, 21st February 2011 @ 08:08:00 AM AEST
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i really injoyed y our poem, it caused me to think. Yes, change is illusive, but mustt come from within. What is our purpose in life seems to be the most meaningf ul existential quest sion, perhaps our spirituaitiy is or core issue.

I feel your poem was very sll written. I really love the last line

Well done, will

Re: Inessential Man (User Rating: 1 )
by blended76 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 07:23:13 AM AEST
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Love the last two lines......Nicely written!

Re: Inessential Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Frillycakes on Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 06:58:23 AM AEST
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Great idea,
wonderful execution,
this is all that it should be

Frillycakes

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